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Christioned
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Huddling in the dark

0 posted 2004-10-26 09:03 PM



Two worlds exist
were only one may reside.
Both in a constant struggle
each wanting to gain complete control.
Neither having the power to do so
neither being able to grasp it for long.
Two worlds
Two different people
reside were only one may reign.

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WranglrButts9
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since 2004-10-24
Posts 108
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1 posted 2004-10-27 08:41 PM


Wow, this is really good. I can kind of relate because I've had to keep things away from my parents so I could go out with someone. I practically lived a diff. life while we were going out. This is awesome!

Bailey

Good judgment comes from experience,
and a lotta that comes from bad judgment.

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2 posted 2004-10-27 11:03 PM


Andi, I always enjoy your poems - this one being no exception.
I love how some pip people who haven't posted in awhile are beginning to post again. Yes, that includes you.
I could really relate to this poem and the ending was awesome:

"Two worlds
Two different people
reside were only one may reign."


Keep Posting!

~Alli~

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