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moonguardian2004
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0 posted 2004-10-25 07:16 PM


Why do you haunt my dreams?
My memories are enough
Sweet dreams of Nightmares
Every image of you is rough

I can see your eyes
I can see your smile
I have every feature memorized
Everyone of them on file

A dream is a wish your heart makes
When it's fast asleep
My wishes are far from real
My sleeping must be very deep

I love you.....you love me
That's how the story goes
But not all stories have happy endings
Some are full of many woes

Wishing on a star
Is a never ending dream
Never ending wishes
Aren't as easy as they seem

I wish I had you in my arms
To hug and hold you tight
There once was a time
This made everything alright

I doubt the hauntings will ever end
I'll leave that to my heart
My dreams will never end
My dreams will never let us part


~*To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path and don't worry about the darkness for that is when stars shine oh so bright !~

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branden726
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1 posted 2004-10-25 07:22 PM


I like this alot. All you've got to do is give things time. You expressed yourself well and don't worry things will brighten up.
HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17
Posts 495
LI, New York
2 posted 2004-10-26 02:39 PM


It seems your living the same life as I: afraid to go to sleep, because you KNOW what you are going to dream. Staying up until you know you'll pass out so deep that you won't have energy to dream.  Living that surreal nightmare  that is the past over and over again. I know the feeling, trust me. He's right though, with time everything will brighten, I hope.  For you. And for me.  Nice write!


                                                                         -Rich


Winamp is Playing:
"All or Nothing"
Dirty Vegas
Dirty Vegas

Part of knowing where I'm going
is knowing where I've been
~Rich~

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