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Tequilia_Sunrise
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0 posted 2004-10-23 11:05 PM



the emphasis on physical appearance
generates billions for Maybeline and Revlon
sucking in teens with a poor self image who
ache to belong somewhere
beautiful spokeswomen from pop culture pull
their victims in with promises and songs
and the rest of us laugh at the
advertisements while hiding behind our masks
an air of indifference and naughty flip of
the hair shields us by day
yet we scour and pluck and apply ourselves behind closed doors
blend away depression
smooth over insecurities
brush on an attitude
all to hide ourselves from the world and
thereby become socially acceptable
until the day we realize we're as empty as
the next girl

[This message has been edited by Tequilia_Sunrise (10-24-2004 12:51 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-10-24 11:26 PM


mmm...Poems like these always make me sit back and think...to once again go over myself and my image and wonder at all the insicurities I cover up...very well written, I liked the title it fit well...
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2 posted 2004-10-24 11:35 PM


"yet we scour and pluck and apply ourselves behind closed doors
blend away depression
smooth over insecurities
brush on an attitude
all to hide ourselves from the world and
thereby become socially acceptable
until the day we realize we're as empty as
the next girl"


so true...so true...

this poem is so thought provoking..enjoyed.

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3 posted 2004-10-25 05:19 PM


Image is everything these days and you expressed it well.
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