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Sweetest Sorrow X
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since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

0 posted 2004-10-20 05:11 PM

When the doors finally opened there you were.

You smiled and looked at the ground.

I was reluctant to make a move.

Would I run to you just to hit a screen

You still behind it?

Would you smile and fade away?

Would you wave and smile and give me another obstacle?

I couldn't bear it.

People shoved me to the side, onward to their everyday.

This was my first.

I walked forward.
I think the part that made me forget my words was when your skin felt warm, you kisses felt real.

The rest was a blur.

I choose my company by the beating of their hearts

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electricxheart
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since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

1 posted 2004-10-20 08:04 PM

i love how in all your poetry, it
happens to paint a picture and
creates almost like a little story.

very beautiful//

-kelly

i could be an accident, but i'm still trying.

Sweetest Sorrow X
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since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

2 posted 2004-10-21 02:21 PM

thanks sooo much
<3
Persephone

I choose my company by the beating of their hearts

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2004-10-21 04:05 PM

that sounds like love . . .

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The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-10-21 06:28 PM

awesome...just like ur poems always are.

~Alli~

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Lexy
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since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

5 posted 2004-10-22 10:24 PM

People shoved me to the side, onward to their everyday.
this is my favorite line.
the way you write I can see it, and that's great writing.

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