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At Last |
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thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
At last my heart is bleeding for a sad sad situation Her eyes just speaking as a sweet candy inspiration And while my thoughts are sleeping from this sad sad situation My mind is waiting for one hopeless hint of confirmation So if you don't mind, i'll just sit here a while longer Just a little while to sit, to sigh and to ponder To think on her wholeness and obvious beauty all together She's the medicine i've needed... Just let me sit a while longer At last my heart is singing for a sad sad situation Just like the rest i'm praying for one hint of confirmation And while my thoughts are screaming for this sad sad situation My mind is waiting for her eyes and all there temptation So if you don't mind, i'll just sit and wait a while I know she'll be here pretty soon with her gentile smile And even if she dosn't see the slightest thing in me I'll continue to think of her as the better part of me [This message has been edited by thinktwice (10-21-2004 08:48 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Adam, this IS a song . . . beautiful |
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doyouseemeforme Junior Member
since 2005-06-25
Posts 18 |
this is the best poem/song I have ever read Death leaves a heartache no one can heal, love leaves a memory no one can steal. |
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