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red_angel*16
Member

since 2004-09-04

Posts 71

0 posted 2004-10-19 06:08 AM

Can you tell how a person is really like
with out looking underneth the light ?
take a look at the guy you like
tell me what you see
tell us what you think of he

is he true, is he neat?
does he make your heart skip a beat?
is he nice, is he cool?
does he act like a total fool?

does he make you smile, does he cheer you up?
can he get rid of all your fears?
can the both of you get along?
with love by your side can you go wrong ?

so com'on what do you think of he?
dont be shy, go on tell me
before you answer that let me ask you this
and dont lie, tell the truth, just try

Do you even know this person at all?
maybe he's just there to watch you fall...

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-10-19 04:20 PM

Cute poem.

My favorite parts:

"is he true, is he neat?
does he make your heart skip a beat?"

"does he make you smile, does he cheer you up?"

Like I said before, a cute poem...good job.

Keep posting redangel!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

2 posted 2004-10-19 05:00 PM

"Do you even know this person at all?
maybe he's just there to watch you fall..."

I loved these lines and can totally relate to this . . . Great write!

* For all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are those, "It might have been." *

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2004-10-20 09:58 AM

red,

I would answer all of the above
and yes and no
*smile*

we never do know, nice writing

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

4 posted 2004-10-21 08:12 AM

this is what my friends have been saying to me for the last week and a half...... well written and i love your work...
keep them ccomin..
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

infinite disaster
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 69
Illinois

5 posted 2004-10-21 01:15 PM

i like this poem. kinda makes you think whether or not the guy's worth your time. good job.

Why can't I feel anything from anyone other than you?

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