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Teen Poetry #7

We started out as friends....

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2004-10-17 04:09 AM

We started out apart
Your love filled my heart,

From that moment on,
I can’t sense none other,
To share my tears with,

You brought joy in my life,
And never left my side,

To heaven I made way,
Flying like a dove,
Carrying your love,

I thank God,
For my good deeds in the past,
To have a angel like you,
Nestled within my heart.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-10-17 11:01 PM

"I can’t sense none other,
To share my tears with,

You brought joy in my life,
And never left my side.

Liked those lines...great work!
I'm so glad to see you posting again!

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

2 posted 2004-10-18 01:25 PM

wow, that was amazing...its good to have someone special in your life...enojoyed the write and hope to read more of your work.

~suicide is not so much the wish to die as it is the fear of living~

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