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LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2004-10-17 02:41 AM


i called you up
said we should hang out
"go for coffee"
you know?

it had been a while
since i saw you last
i missed you
did you miss me?

it was nice
to see your smile
i had forgot
how much i missed it

i ordered hot chocolate
you tried something new
some kind of cyder
i think?

we talked lots
as usual
i spilled my heart
u didnt like it

it got late
we said our goodbyes
school night for you
you needed the rest

that was my night
2 hours not wasted
though i hated it all
how about coffee next week?



~suicide is not so much the wish to die as it is the fear of living~

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aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
1 posted 2004-10-17 08:19 AM


this exact same thing happened to me last week...... well written and good luck with the coffee... hehehe....
keep ones like this comin
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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