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Teen Poetry #7

too greedy

LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2004-10-17 12:55 PM

i just WANT someone
to love me
to tell me they care
someone to hug me.

i just WANT someone
i can talk to
a shoulder to cry one
someone to help me through.

i just WANT someone
to be there for me
to give me trust
someone to care about me.

i just WANT someone
to be my friend
to help me through life
someone til the end.

is it too much to ask?

~suicide is not so much the wish to die as it is the fear of living~

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-10-17 01:29 AM

The answer to your question: no. That's not to much to ask for at all, and that's not being greedy at all. hey, even want that too!

"i just WANT someone
i can talk to
a shoulder to cry one
someone to help me through."

Liked this poem...and your quote signature thing, liked that too.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

2 posted 2004-10-17 01:30 AM

if you wann talk my email addy is squash_rules@hotmail.com

~suicide is not so much the wish to die as it is the fear of living~

aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

3 posted 2004-10-17 08:21 AM

this is defintly not too much to ask of someone....
well written..
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

LOSTinTHISworld
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

4 posted 2004-10-17 01:26 PM

thanx alli, and aussie teen for your coments.

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