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Teen Poetry #7

With U I Could Never Be

One_Love
New Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 3

0 posted 2004-10-13 01:57 PM

I hate the way u loved me.
I hate the fact u lied.
I hate the way u said the words,
that lead myself to cry.

Your not the guy I loved before.
I’m not the one to taunt.
Now I’m left to open your eyes,
to show I’m not the one.

Your love was never for me.
And I was left to see.
Your love was meant for her.
Now my heart is free.

Your say the words I love you.
You say the words, you mean.
But I guess now I see the words were lies.
Just never meant for me.

I loved you with all my heart.
But I guess you dint see.
Now my love has turn to hate,
with you I could never be.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-10-13 07:33 PM

Hmmm... i like this....

I have been there brfore, but you should forgive him, atleast do it for yourself. You dont want to be wrapped up in hating him...its just not worth it. Beleive me, it has taken me a while to realize it, and i know, that i have missed out on a lot of thimgs....because i was blinded by hate...

Anyways... good poem, i like it.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

2 posted 2006-05-09 04:54 PM

Hey i really like this. It reminds me of my last love. Good write.

You might have scars all over your body, but what about the one ingraved in your body.

pullingxthextrigger
Member

since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

3 posted 2006-05-09 05:26 PM

awesome!!! i loved every single stanza. but like karissa said-forgive and forget?
keep it up

~nora<3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD!

Sweetpali08
Junior Member

since 2006-05-07

Posts 40

4 posted 2006-05-09 11:30 PM

This was good.
The meaning behind was brought out with such honesty.
Sometimes when you think life ended because of some guy , just remember it might have been a test from God to lead you to a better journey..

Keeep them coming..

"How are they the VICTIMS if they are the OCCUPIERS?!"
~Paradise now

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