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Growing Hurt
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Growing Hurt |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world 
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The door is closed, I've locked away the past. Locked away all the hurt of something that couldn't last. I see a stairway leading me past all that I've known. Scared, uneasily, I walk... and in that one step I have grown. It wasn't supposed to hurt so long, it was supposed to go away. As heavy as a summer rain may be, it wasn't meant to stay. It's still here, it stil burns, still reminds me of memories, no matter how hard I push away, they still haunt me, begging to see. I want it to leave my heart, leave me to be normal again, or at least give me something good, I would take a heart on lend. Though I might have a journey ahead, it still hurts to see all that's there, going back, wishing we were still, it's just too much to bare. I want to be normal again, not hurt and not so alone, the remnants of my heart lay out, still pieces missing where I've sew. -Erin Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't. |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
the last word was meant to be sewn, sorry, I see a couple typos, I'm in a hurry, sorry guys! enjoy! Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't. |
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sweetie_cute_2004 New Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 5 |
Hey, I truly enjoyed your poem, it is amazing!! Thats life |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Although this poem isn't your best work, in my opinion, I still really enjoyed reading it! "I want to be normal again, not hurt and not so alone, the remnants of my heart lay out, still pieces missing where I've sewn." That was the part I liked. Also, just to let you know if you dont already know this, you can edit your posts up to 24hours after you post it. If it's been past those 24hours, you can ask a moderator for assisstance.  Anyways, great poem, keep on posting!  ~Alli~ Look! It's my 700th post! I feel so special...lol... *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened... |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Amazing write hun. I loved it. I can relate soooo much. It sort of brought a tear to my eye....  *Sniffle* i really loved this, i am saving.Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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