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Teen Poetry #7

Acting

Christioned
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 93
Huddling in the dark

0 posted 2004-10-07 06:08 PM

The stage is set,
the lights are dimed.
My costumes ready,
shoes neatly tied.
The lines rehearsed,
make-up applied,
hair done in a grand, new fashion.
Now into my character I become.
One last passing glance at the mirror,
and I'm finally ready to go to school.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-10-07 07:05 PM

Andi, another great post!

"Now into my character I become,
and I'm finally ready to go to school."

The above part was my fav. It's sometimes scary how much people will change themselves just to be accepted by people at school.
Anyways...another great poem by you that is going into my library.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2004-10-11 12:48 PM

I really like this, the begining built up to the end just perfectly. From one actor to another, I like the statement it makes.
Thanks for sharing.

WinterWren-
Counting stars wishing I was ok,
Crashing down was my biggest mistake.

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