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tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2004-09-30 07:48 PM

Hey guys, sorry I haven't been here much, I've been super busy with stuff...well I wrote something, not really sure if its good or not, it's not my best but let me know if there's something i can do to better it!

Those Special Moments

I want to dance that special dance,
In the presence of your arms,
While I look up into your eyes,
Them assuring me of no harm.

I want to walk that special walk,
Down a deserted little road,
Only with you holding my hand,
And my heart about to explode.

I want to eat that special meal,
When it’s only you and me,
Where we talk about everything,
And I make you finally see.

I want to dance in the rain,
With you by my side,
Laughing and dancing,
While we put aside our pride.

I want to watch that special movie,
Just so I could be next to you,
Feeling your presence next to me;
So unaware of what to do.

I want to sit around with you,
Doing absolutely nothing at all,
Cause the little things still mean so much,
And it’s even further for you I fall.

I want to be near to you,
No matter what we do,
Cause I want to spend those special
moments right there next to you.

-Erin

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-09-30 07:53 PM

Erin! Whew!

I would tell you what my favorite stanza was, but I loved them all. Your poems always flow so well, and I'm always able to relate to them.
I'm going to add this poem to my library.

Great job!

~Alli~

BTW...Your one of my favorite poets from the Teen Forum.

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

I_dont_know_me
Junior Member

since 2003-12-08

Posts 48
UK, Cymru

2 posted 2004-10-01 07:19 AM

Wow another great poem by you! you always seem to get a grasp on my heart strings wen im reading your poems. its weird its like your speaking my mind! keep them coming... Please

~Emma~

Im definately adding this poem

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

3 posted 2004-10-02 01:56 PM

o wow, thanks guys! I'm glad you liked it and thanks for always taking time out to read my poems, I really appriciate it! Hope everyone's doing good!

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

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