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tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2004-09-21 07:44 PM




This poem is dedicated to chris. Thank you so much for always being there for me!


He calls me to tell me
that I am going through his mind.
  
He calls me and listens to all of my problems.
And he askes if I am  ok.

He calls me and tells me how lucky he is to find
a friend like me.

He calls and asks "Hun, how was your day"

He is MY GUY

© Copyright 2004 Laura Risner - All Rights Reserved
Sweetpoet16m4u04
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since 2002-11-10
Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A
1 posted 2004-09-21 11:24 PM


OMG HUN!! I would never have thought i was that special to be written about. I can't believe you did that and it was beyond special for me to read that. You are an amazing girl and you always will be in my eyes. I will always continue to be there for you no matter what darling. I love you to death.
davidmerriman
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since 2003-04-30
Posts 123
Dallas, TX
2 posted 2004-09-28 06:03 PM


haha how unbelieveably unclassy
tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
3 posted 2004-09-28 06:25 PM


wow to express your opinion is one thing but please dont laugh at what I write. that is "unclassy" and disrespectful.
*Alli4000*
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4 posted 2004-09-28 06:52 PM


I know i've said some mean stuff before to some poems, but David...if u knew the person she was writing about, you would know how great he is and how good she described him! lol...
Like your poem!

~Alli~

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aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
5 posted 2004-10-08 12:10 PM


hey this is really cool.... i love it
keep up the writing...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

red_angel*16
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since 2004-09-04
Posts 71

6 posted 2004-10-09 06:33 AM


I soooo love ur poem!!!
I cant wait to read more.
keep writing !!!

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