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young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-09-20 10:36 PM

Here's a song for my band. the style is acoustic. our vocals sound much like somethng corporate. the guitar is closer to Dave Matthews picking. enjoy. please leave critiques!

The Most Beautiful Nights

what a lovely night my dear,
It's made simple only by the dark.
what a way to keep you here,
Leaving all of you alone.

It's the most beautiful nights
That make me the loneliest,
But I'm better off at home.
It's the quiet times at midnight
That turn your whisper into fear,
But it's better off unknown.

what a lovely night my dear,
It's made simple only by the dark.
what a way to keep you here,
Leaving all of you alone.

It's the loneliest nights
That make you so beautiful,
And we're better off at home.
It's at midnight when
The quiet holds our hands
soft and slow into unknown.

what a lovely night my dear,
It's made simple only by the dark.
what a way to keep you here,
Leaving all of you alone.

So please don't drive me away
Cuz I don't think I'd wake again,
And don't scream out my name
Cuz screams come at the end.

what a lovely night my dear,
It's made simple only by the dark.
what a way to keep you here,
Leaving all of you alone.

now im alone, but not lonely like before

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-09-28 05:00 PM

hmm...i dont like it that no one has replied to this. It was really good...

I swear, that makes me so mad when people do that.

Anyways...Like i said before, this was an awesome write, and i could almost picture it. The music for this must be amazing...

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

electricxheart
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

2 posted 2004-09-28 06:23 PM

i can just imagine how awesome this
will sound with music. i'm sure it
will turn out great.

keep on writing.

--kelly

i could be an accident, but i'm still trying.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2004-09-28 09:12 PM

thank you both for the encouragement. if there's anything you guys think should be changed, let me know.

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

4 posted 2004-10-22 06:50 PM

great stuff, songwriter

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

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