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thinktwice
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0 posted 2004-09-20 12:40 PM


Under the writer's nose
lay finger's tapping one at a time
"What to write"
"What to write"

"If only to let them think
once or twice
If only to let them think
once over night"

Simple confusion for the masses?
A possible query over their glasses?
"What to say"
"What to say"

Again he begin to write
his riddles and rhymes
Again his mission lay clear
and his mind began to write

Under this writers eyes
lay finished work, his prize
He read it once, read it twice
His mission complete,
it made him think twice

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1 posted 2004-09-20 11:54 PM


"He read it once, read it twice
His mission complete,
it made him think twice"


Is this your theme poem? lol...

Seriously though, I liked this poem and thought that you did a nice job with it.
Keep on posting!

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thinktwice
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2 posted 2004-09-21 01:16 AM


theme poem...i don't know. i was trying to convey what my name meant. some people that read my stuff say it's confusing or that they have to read it a few times to understand the meaning. hence my screen name. i didn't really even plan for this one to end like it did. it just worked. it got a little predictable, but i can't fit my own style everytime.
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