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Emotional Roller Coaster

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PurplePeopleEater
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since 01-04-2002
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0 posted 09-19-2004 07:19 PM       View Profile for PurplePeopleEater   Email PurplePeopleEater   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PurplePeopleEater

this is pretty much about my last boyfriend...a lot of stuff still inside that i needed to get out after about 6 months

I act like everything is normal
I act like everything is okay
What you did is not normal
It was never okay

Your absence was embraced
Those three months I treasured
To have it end with a sorry
In a meaningless, drunken haze

Iím still not okay
Everything is not normal
You hurt me in the worst possible way
A way I will keep forever

You said we wouldnít work
Because youíre a soldier now
A man of war
The kind who could never love

My first love died so quick, so abrupt
I want to forget, move on but I canít
I donít love you nor do I like you
For some reason I still care, I always will

Random hellos that annoy on the outside
Bring a peace inside thatís unexplainable
I love to hate you yet I hate to lose you
Youíre the biggest jerk I know

Donít say hi, donít even give a glance
I need to move on in isolation
Go away, donít look back
I canít stand the past, itís killing me inside

I forgive you yet I still donít like you

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IHaveADeepLOVE4POETRY1995
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1 posted 11-26-2008 11:53 PM       View Profile for IHaveADeepLOVE4POETRY1995   Email IHaveADeepLOVE4POETRY1995   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for IHaveADeepLOVE4POETRY1995

That was pretty good keep up the great work.

Kateyshine911
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since 11-20-2008
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2 posted 12-03-2008 07:29 PM       View Profile for Kateyshine911   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Kateyshine911

that is a very moving poem.
I LOVE IT.
nina1522
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since 02-14-2009
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3 posted 02-14-2009 09:15 PM       View Profile for nina1522   Email nina1522   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nina1522

very nice poem but i think the words could flow a little better. but i truly loved it
 
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