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tapper798
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0 posted 2004-09-17 12:31 PM


Reminders

As I walk down the street
I notice the little things around,
All the things that remind me of you,
I love them all I’ve found.

It’s those little things,
The whiff of your cologne,
Reminds me of that comfort
That I had once known.

It’s that shine in your eyes,
I see in the sun everyday,
The way your eyes sparkled,
With my mind they would play.

It’s that touch I feel,
Always hoping that it’s yours,
And knowing that it’s not
Leaves my heart hurt and torn.

It’s the songs I heard all the time,
When ever I was with you,
But now when I hear them I try to hide
the fact that I still don’t know what to do.

It’s the things you would say,
That I hear every once in awhile,
Wishing you would still say them,
Even if you left my heart in a pile.

Its little things that I see everyday,
That always remind me of you,
You can’t avoid them, they’re everywhere,
I’m stuck in the memory of you.

-Erin

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

© Copyright 2004 Erin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-09-17 09:50 AM


"Its little things that I see everyday,
That always remind me of you,
You can’t avoid them, they’re everywhere,
I’m stuck in the memory of you."

Erin! I don't think there has been one poem of yours that I havn't been able to relate to, and this is no exception.  My favorite stanza was the last one (above).

great poem!

~Alli~


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I_dont_know_me
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2 posted 2004-09-18 08:35 AM


i agree i can relate to all your poems! theyre all great, keep it up! i especially love....

"It’s the things you would say,
That I hear every once in awhile,
Wishing you would still say them,
Even if you left my heart in a pile."

i think this stanza is how i feel right now! thanks for a great read

~Emma~


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