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thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
Unbridled by the winds that seem to blow an endless chorus Untitled as a poem holding onto the strengths in the verses Some building up as a castle on a pastured hill in fairylands those captured minds die down until... The dreamless dream moves into forever With an end, yes, but leaves peace moreover And while they sit and stare in wonder The time will pass when no song will cover The lives they live in wishes a blunder Rivled by the haze of joy that's tendered in the hands of spite Cradled as a maze of darkness controlled by a moonless night Others builing up a hope for a second's thrill Out of fairylands those battled minds may move in for a kill... The dreamless dream moves into forever With and end, yes, but leaves peace moreover And while they sit and stare and wonder The time will pass when no song will cover The lives they lives and their wishes a blunder |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
how about "Wind Chimes in C#"? |
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thinktwice Member
since 2003-12-23
Posts 125United States |
thanks..i like that. to bad i can only edit the post 24 hours after the original post...oh well. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Actually thinktwice if you contact a moderator, I'm sure that they could get the title changed for you. If you go to the main page of the Teen Forum, you will see at the top left.. Moderated by: and then the names of the moderators. Just click any of thier names, send them an e-mail, and I'm sure they'll get it fixed for you!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Whew! I got so caught up in telling you how to get the title changed, I forgot to comment on your poem.  I liked it, and I think that you did a great job!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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