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AtLsHawTy17 Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 60IL, |
He stares at her With tears dripping down How will he go on With her not around He looks back He wants to let her know That he loves her and Can't let her go She just sits in silence He is fading into the night He has the flowers and The most beautiful ring of her life He holds it to his heart Lets out a painful sigh Knowing they'll never be togeather He asks her over and over "why?" Still no words He is falling apart Why can't she just stay with him Why can't he have her heart The tears still dripping He looks her in the eye As they close the casket and lower it He knows all he can say is goodbye... Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me |
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dodge_chick2003 Member
since 2004-01-18
Posts 136California |
Why hasnt anybody replied to this poem? Grrrrr.....This poem was so sad and at the same time sweet. Please keep up the good work |
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A.L Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 131 |
oh man...I didnt see that ending coming...Honestly, tears filled my eyes after reading it  it was so sad...but good! I see me frowning in your eyes... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I think the poem should definatley stay! lol. Seriously though, I really didn't see the end coming either  This poem was great, even though it was about something so sad. Keep Posting and I'll keep reading!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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