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when you said good-bye
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when you said good-bye |
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Lindsay Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 59South Dakota |
Why is everything all messed up? I thought I had it all, but I lost it in a moment In the moment when you said good-bye I knew right then and there that nothing would be the same We had something special, how could you just walk out? You never did turn around to see the tears falling from my face Or the pain in my eyes from my breaking heart You just kept on walking, out of my house and out of my life I don't know much at all, I don't know wrong from right, All I know is that I love you tonight |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Oh hun you have no idea how many times I have felt the same way, I seem to be slightly guy challenged...anyways this one touched a heart string, very honest oustpouring of emotion, nicely done. ~Live and Laugh~ Don't look to me for perfection for I will surely let you down. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
so glad I stopped to read these poems ion this forum. sad sad poem. hoped writing it helped you. Ive been in your shoes before..... and it is such a hard situation. stay strong love and empathy darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
*big hugs* if you need someone to listen, feel free to email me  and then He created the horse... |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Very emotional write, i could feel them through your words. Very amazing. Keep it up... Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
"You just kept on walking, out of my house and out of my life" First of all: Secondly: If you ever need to talk, I'm open to e-mail as well...or my aim s/n is Alli4000.  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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red_angel*16 Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 71 |
OMG I totally can relate this poem that happened to me with my ex I cant wait to read more of ur poem keep writing !!! |
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