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Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-09-09 08:26 PM


(This is just one of my ventures into sonnets. comments would be appreciated.)

Perfectly Imperfect

entranced and untalkative
sandwiched between boredome and television
may be we could go for a walk if
you feel like moving from your couched position
perfectly imperfect
i would have it no other way
beautifully imperfect
please could you just stay
if only for a moment longer
flash that smile once more
you know, the one that makes me stronger
before you sneak past my door
beautifully, perfectly imperfect, there is no other way
beautifully, perfectly imperfect, please stay this way


nice use of muffin

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AtLsHawTy17
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 60
IL,
1 posted 2004-09-09 09:12 PM


wow i like it, it was really good wow

Too late to cry, you're gone... why should I cry, you can't wipe the tears dry, so what am I to do? I need to be with you....-Me

electricxheart
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 184
far away from home.
2 posted 2004-09-19 08:41 PM



i don't know why you only got one
response. well now, i'm making it
two responses

i really loved this. it almost
sang to me in a way. truly, truly
beautiful.

always keep that pen to paper!

best wishes-kelly.

i could be a accident, but i'm still trying.

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