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AtLsHawTy17
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since 2004-09-07

Posts 60
IL,

0 posted 2004-09-07 05:59 PM

The tears fell
The hurt was all that was there
No one to hold me
No one to care

Did I do something to deserve this
Did I say something wrong
Why haven't I seen you
Why has it been so long

I miss you
Does that mean anything at all
At night I seen to dream
That one day the tears won't fall

You made me feel good
You helped me through my pain
Now that you aren't with me
I have nothing left to gain

Why is it so hard to pick up
Where I left off before you
Why am I struggling through this
Why am I always feeling so blue

The tears fell
But meant nothing when wiped away
I wish I could have held you once more
Before you chose not to stay

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-09-07 06:33 PM

Wow. Great poem. My favorite lines were:

"I miss you
Does that mean anything at all
At night I seem to dream
That one day the tears won't fall"

I can realte to this poem so much. Just stay strong and hang in there and you'll get through it.

By the way, welcome to Passions.

Please check your e-mail for a special greeting.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-09-07 08:53 PM

Wow...this was really sweet, and sad. I know how you feel. I have to agree with *Alli* those were probably the best and my favorite lines also...

Keep up the good work.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

3 posted 2004-09-10 06:39 AM

beautiful.....
i love these lines
'the tears fell
but meant nothing when wiped away
i wish i could have held you once more
before you chose not to stay'

these lines brought tears to my eyes because im going through the same thing a the moment.
nicely put.....
keep up your writing.
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

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