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tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
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My own world

0 posted 2004-09-05 02:28 PM



You told me I should trust you,
That I was at fault when I failed,
Made me believe I was in the wrong,
That I’d put up the wrong sail.

I put my heart in you,
Trusting with all of me,
And you let me down,
You aren’t what I thought you’d be.

You lied to me,
Promised me we’d be forever,
Leading me to a wonderful dream,
Of you and me together.

Now I regret believing you,
Thinking I was the one to blame,
That I’d done something wrong,
When it was you just the same.

I might be easy to get over,
I might be easy to forget,
But hurting me like you have,
Is something that you will regret.

I won’t let you forget that easy,
Cause it sure to heck wasn’t for me,
Welcome to the hell you put me in,
It’s time for you to come and see.

I hated knowing you hurt,
But you didn’t seem to care,
You seemed to forget that I was you shoulder
When no one else was there.

I hate the way I loved you,
I hate the way I still do,
I hate the way that I still care,
I hate the way I wish u did, too.

-Erin

Ok yeah guys my poems have been kinda down lately, I'm sorry I'm going through a hard time, uh just let me know what you think!

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

© Copyright 2004 Erin - All Rights Reserved
kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
1 posted 2004-09-05 02:34 PM


The flow was a little off...but the poem itself was great. I really loved it, and could really really really relate a lot! I loved the ending. I hope everything gets better...i wish i could tell you it did, but i am not so sure myself...

If you ever wanna talk, email me at Kissa_bear04@hotmail.com
I'll be here.

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

dodge_chick2003
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since 2004-01-18
Posts 136
California
2 posted 2004-09-05 05:16 PM


Its weird how one day someone can be your world and the next it feels like your life is over. Believe me you will get over it faster than you know, you will eventaully find someone better and you will forget about everything that happened. If you ever need anyone to talk to e-mail me at lexy_lou387@yahoo.com or lil_devel06@hotmail.com

*Alli4000*
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The World of Poetry
3 posted 2004-09-05 05:37 PM


Wow...I'm so sorry that you have to go through this....

If you ever want to talk: e-mail: alg20@juno.com || aim s/n: Alli4000

This poem, like your other ones lately have been amazing, even though they are written about such sad things. :|

~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

I_dont_know_me
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since 2003-12-08
Posts 48
UK, Cymru
4 posted 2004-09-07 01:23 PM



I hate the way I loved you,
I hate the way I still do,
I hate the way that I still care,
I hate the way I wish u did, too.
i loved this bit altho it wasnt really in tune with the poem it still gave it a nice ending! i love all ur poems an its ok be 2 sad! i feel like this at the moment but remember dont cry because its over smile because it happened! ~Emma~

skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
5 posted 2004-09-07 01:27 PM


We all know what you are going through because we've all been there. Very expressive poem--keep your head up and it'll all work out.

~sky

So you go and make it happen
Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

AtLsHawTy17
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 60
IL,
6 posted 2004-09-07 06:03 PM


this totally brings me back wow i love it  this verse was the one i truely can relate to    
Now I regret believing you,
Thinking I was the one to blame,
That I’d done something wrong,
When it was you just the same.

A.L
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since 2003-03-15
Posts 131

7 posted 2004-09-09 12:30 PM


wow...I know how exactly ya feel...he will realize what he lost...they always do...
A.L
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since 2003-03-15
Posts 131

8 posted 2004-09-09 12:50 PM


adding to my library

I see me frowning in your eyes...
I see the fear in you...
Where no one ever should be...

::From Autumn To Ashes::

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