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Danielle
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0 posted 2004-09-05 12:55 PM



A child?
Are we ready?
How long till we can handle what life throws?
When will be on our feet and on our own?
And happy?

So young, and growing up so fast
Do you ever wonder if was fate?
Could it be the Powers That Be?
Is there ever a question in your mind?

At times I find myself scared
Unsure whether or not you will leave me
I've done some much to hurt you in the past
Yet you stayed

I try to look before I leap
To think before I speak
To stop before I hurt someone
It is hard

Feeling so alone
So unloved
I just want some comfort
To be needed, to be wanted

You are my life and my world
I am becasue of you
I want you to see me try
To see I really care for you

Blessed Be Those Who
Reads My Writing

© Copyright 2004 Danielle Lefebvre - All Rights Reserved
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I wish you the best of luck in this situation....I hope you have family there to support you emotionally.
dodge_chick2003
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2 posted 2004-09-05 05:22 PM


I didnt really understand this poem but if I did I'm sure it would be great.
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3 posted 2004-12-25 06:23 PM




~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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