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Teen Poetry #7

don't drown

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-10-17 10:38 PM

Denial isn't just some river in Egypt;
its an ocean as big as the world.

How do you keep yourself from drowning?
Just hold your head up and don't loose sight of your hopes,
your dreams,
your love.

When the dam breaks, all you can do is swim.

You can only lie to yourself for so long,
denying it doesn't change the truth.
Sooner or later
we have to put it aside,
and face the world head on,
guns blazing.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2005-10-18 01:49 AM

the start was clever. kinda made me chuckle. the rest was alright. it just needs some spice. *hands laura some garlic and cloves*

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

2 posted 2005-10-18 12:53 PM

Understanding this all toooooo well. Enjoyed.

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

3 posted 2005-10-18 05:12 PM

thanks!!!!! ill try harder and edit sometime soon... maybe... been busy thanks tho!!!!

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

4 posted 2005-11-01 12:18 PM

I loved this. I can totally relate.

Jezzika

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