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Teen Poetry #7

Voices From Above

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-08-12 10:21 AM

Voices From Above

the sky is a wonder today,
look up and gaze into the blue
desert spotted with white dunes.
"OO" and "Ah" at shrunken dragons,
their speech garbled among the sweet winds
as they swoop in games of aerial tag.
Stare into the bleach spot in the expanse
and turn to see nothing but white linen everywhere,
(the sun gives the best shade from the moon).
Calm as the Sargossa Sea and bright as De Gama's IQ,
The mirrored sea (or was it desert?)
Shows us the way we wish to be, unpolluted by ourselves.

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

1 posted 2004-08-12 03:35 PM

I enjoyed the view

croyles
Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 102

2 posted 2004-08-12 06:03 PM

man i like your style, this is the kind of writing i always wanted to do.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2004-08-12 11:58 PM

thanks copperbell and croyles

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