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tapper798
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My own world

0 posted 2004-08-08 11:20 AM


The sun rises,
colors bright and shining.
The clouds, color them amazing,
as though straight from a painting.
Birds fly above me,
graceful, beautiful.
Without thier wings to gluide
they wouldn't be birds.
It would not allow them
to see the
amazing, unforgettable and
unseen by humans.
Nor would I be able
to live without my wings, you.
You are my wings which I gluide.
I've seen things
amazing, unforgettable,
something most don't see,
they let it pass them by.
They call it love.
I walk away from
the sunrise, colors beautiful,
knowing that
like the wings of a bird,
you complete me.

-Erin

Hey guys, let me know what you think!

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

© Copyright 2004 Erin - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-08-28 09:10 PM


So maybe this isn't your best work, but why hasn't anyone replied to it?!!?

"Knowing that
like the wings of a bird,
you complete me."

This was my favortie part.  Keep Writing Erin!

~Alli~

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2 posted 2004-12-25 06:31 PM




Happy Holidays!

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