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silent pleas and unanswered prayers
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silent pleas and unanswered prayers |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
She lays there the darkness consoling her, The only sound to be heard, are her muffled sobs, her silent pleas of death. The wind was howling, the dogs were growling, hearing her silent pleas. As she layed there, on the bitter, cold cement, the wind sending chills up her spine. Suddenly the sobbing stops, the hurt desintegrates, leaving only rage. The wind ceases, the dogs are silenced. Darkness envelopes her, the clouds turn red, like the blood dripping from her pale skin. Thunder rolls. The wind awakens, as feirce as a raging storm. The dogs go mad, with a bark so deafening, it could wake the dead. They knew what was coming. Karissa |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oooooooooo ok part 2!! Part 2!!! What's coming?!?! Very good....  |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Well...i am not really sure waht is next... but thanks for the comments, i really like this poem, and it took me awhile to write it. Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
Wow! Awesome imagery! lol It's almost like a chapter of a book, you read it and you just want to know more. Very good write! Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow!Wow!Wow!Wow!Wow! I gotta agree with SEA on this one....I need a part 2!!!  ~Alli~ I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh, but I never knew looking back on the laughter would make me cry. |
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