wow I havent been here in awhile this is called Away

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wow I havent been here in awhile this is called Away

broken627
Member

since 2003-11-26

Posts 66
Eugene Oregon

0 posted 2004-07-29 09:56 PM

-*-Away-*-
fly away
to a secret place
far away
a place for you and me
look away
your eyes are something i wake up every morning to see
turn away
its what you do best
walk away
you give me a pain in my chest
give away
your heart to someone else
fly away
to a secret place
far away
just for you and me

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-07-29 10:00 PM

Fly away
to a secret place
Far Away
just for you and me

Beautiful... It sent out a kind of hurt feeling when i read it. a sort of longing..

Very beautifu write, i must say.

It's nice to have you back....

Kissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

2 posted 2004-08-04 06:47 PM

Ah, it'd be nice to just run away with somebody sometimes. I enjoyed this.

It's nice to see you around here again. Hope to see more of your poems here in the near future.

- C.K. Natland -

Nobody Is Perfect Until You Fall In Love With Them.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

3 posted 2004-08-04 07:28 PM

turn away
its what you do best

...this poem gives a good view into your heart, very well done, I liked it. Nice to have you back.
~Live and Laugh~

Don't look to me for perfection for I will surely let you down.
~Bella~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2004-08-21 11:32 PM

Wow broken! wow...this poem just left me speechless! My favorite lines would have to be:

"fly away,
to a secret place
far away,
a place for you and me"

It's nice to see you posting again!

Also, I'm gonna add this to my library...hope that you don't mind!

~Alli~

I always knew looking back on the tears would make me laugh, but I never knew looking back on the laughter would make me cry.

Manth88
Junior Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 45
IL, USA

5 posted 2004-08-23 12:47 PM

Hey Nice write, hope to see more great poems.. It was very deep.

!^*Manth88*^!

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