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happy birthday dad!

LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2005-10-06 02:24 AM

i wrote this for my dad and will give it to him in a few days on his 50th birthday...he loves polar bears so i bought really cute polar bear paper from the dollar store and was gonna write hgim a poem about polars bears, but for some reason i was in a humorous mood and wrote this...i hope he likes it

happy 50th birthday
to the worlds oldest dad
**** i meant greatest
oops my bad
either way todays YOUR day
to do as you please
although your age may limit you
crack! there goes your back and your knees
oh yah i forgot
this poem was supposed to be about polar bears
and unlike you their cute
young and they've still got hair
(so heare it goes)
big white bears
running in the icy breeze
climbimg on glaciers
due to lack of trees
alright i dont know where i was going with that
this poem kinda sucks
but i know its the thought that counts
cuz the paper only cost a buck
and heres my main thought
i hope today you have lots of fun
and know as far as dads go
you'll always be my number one

{in a million years i wont be over you}

Kaos
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

1 posted 2005-10-09 04:14 PM

i'm sure he'll enjoy that alot :-)

"Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light"
-Dylan Thomas

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