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you hate me |
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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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v.1 my hands feel cold tonight all i can think about is you this pain that is in my eyes every time i cry br. is the only thing that is really keeping me alive ch. i'm always alone looking out my window there is nothing not even your voice to comfort me cause you hate me and i hate myself i hate myself.... for you v.2 i wish i could have one more minute to lay in your arms to be myself around you cause maybe you'd love me more br. and you told me... i didn't know what love was i don't agree been hurt so many times i know...i know what it means ch. no matter what i'll always love you |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I enjoyed it, but what does br. stand for?? Other than that, it was a good poem. I enjoyed reading it, and i could relate. I have been hurt many times, and i wish i could say that it gets easier, but it doesnt..... Kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was pretty good. I thought you did nicely.... and for above...br stands for bridge nicely done though  I left my wallet in El Segundo... |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
thank you both... no matter what i'll always love you |
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Cinderelly Member
since 2001-12-31
Posts 189NM, USA |
I always like your poems and this is yet another good one! * For all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are those, "It might have been." * |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Diddo to what Cinderelly said. ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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