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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-07-07 01:34 AM

Have you ever asked yourself why i love you so much?,
Have you ever asked yourself why i need you soo bad?

HAve you ever asked yourself why i cant let go?

Have you ever asked yourself why i choke when im needing you?,

Have you ever asked youself why i die without you?,

Have you ever asked yourself why you are the one that makes me fly?,

Want my answer?
I love you so much because you are my blood,
I need you so bad because you are the one that makes me breathe ,live, im living under you breath.
I cant let go because your part of my body now!
I choke because i need oxygen!!
I die because i dont have my other half with me so whats the point of living?

I FLY because you are the wings,
You are the breath,
You are my smile,
You are my name,

Dont you get it ?
I love you!! (c)

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

[This message has been edited by sweet_cute_palestinian04 (07-07-2004 10:43 AM).]

sweetie_cute_2004
New Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 5

1 posted 2004-07-07 10:25 AM

heyyyyyyyyyy ,,,,sis,,im inlove with this poem.... keep posting your amazing,,

Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

2 posted 2004-07-07 02:46 PM

I love this

I hope your sleeping good at nights....
Knowing I never sleep at all

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2004-07-07 06:38 PM

First off, let me tell you that I am a vvveeerrryyy paranoid person. Don't take this personal ok?...
It's just that you, sweet_cute_palestinian04 and the person that repilied to you poem, sweetie_cute_2004 seem very similar. Your usernames are similar and you write almost the same way. Also, you both became members on the same day. Maybe you guys are twins seperated at birth!

Seriously though, I'll admit that this is not your best work, but it is alright. Just remember to KEEP WRITING!!!

,
~Alli~

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

4 posted 2004-07-07 08:46 PM

hahahahahahahahhaha,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, omg ali ,,u sound sooo angry...no no sis....you dont get it...why would i be stupid enough to reply to my own poem.....well i have a friend of mine ,,,thats her screen name....well sis...if u want to get it wrong i cant control u ....so sorry .,,there is nothing i can do about it!!!!!!!1111 with all do yourself

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-07-08 03:02 PM

I didn't mean to sound angry...I wasn't. Sorry if I did, I was just curious to know...sorry if I seemed angry.

~Alli~

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

6 posted 2004-07-08 04:35 PM

lolol,,its no problem at all...i understand sis..

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

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