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BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2004-07-06 10:19 PM

Forget about me
Live your life
Chase your dreams
'Cause all you see
Is fame and fortune
And all this torture
Is killing me
So here's your stuff back
'Cause I don't need that
In my life
It's time to say goodbye

All you see is a Hollywood sign
And Vegas lights
Do you even care to know that
I cry at night
Wishing you'd wake up
And see
How [edited] much you mean to me
But you don't care
'Cause you believe
You'll make it

Forget about me
I'm not important
It's always first
You still don't see
I hate to cry
As time goes by
You're losing me
So here's your stuff back
'Cause I don't need that
In my life
It's time to say goodbye

All you see is a Hollywood sign
And Vegas lights
Do you even care to know that
I cry at night
Wishing you'd wake up
And see
How [edited] much you mean to me
But you don't care
'Cause you believe
You'll make it*

There is not ONE person in this world that you cannot live without.

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (07-08-2004 05:58 AM).]

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-07-07 01:09 AM

well done,,i really enjoyed it..i hope it will get better for u and i wish u the best good luck and hang in there

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

2 posted 2004-07-07 03:02 AM

I really like this . . .

* For all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are those, "It might have been." *

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2004-07-07 05:36 PM

interesting...
why is it you don't believe this person will make it?

very strongly put.

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

4 posted 2004-07-07 11:28 PM

This poem is written about a guy who devotes himself to the idea of being rich and famous...and it's interfering with his relationship with his significant other. She's starting to get fed up at feeling like she always comes last, and it's her fear of his dreams NOT coming true, and the misery she's been through with him because of his drive, that makes her want to leave. Does that make sense?? LOL.

~J.Lynn

There is not ONE person in this world that you cannot live without.

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

5 posted 2004-07-09 07:14 PM

yep.

thanks

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2004-07-10 11:05 PM

wow . . . i'm speechles

Great poem, keep it up.

~Alli~

broken627
Member

since 2003-11-26

Posts 66
Eugene Oregon

7 posted 2004-07-31 02:20 PM

your poem was awesome...oh and your gorgeous
--from looking at your picture--
Cant wait to hear more of you stuff~
-*-broken-*-
I’ve been sleeping with the lights on
So if I wake in the night
Your picture is clearly in sight

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