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A Volcano Inside Me (im waiting comments)!!!
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A Volcano Inside Me (im waiting comments)!!! |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
To the most close human to my heart To human's heart the cruelty doesn't know way in her heart or lie on her countenance the human's heart does know the love, believe, and honest she moved my feelings my feelings were about to erupt like volcano your voice which only able to stop their hemorrhage how much i hope to be beside you my mind lost by pains and sadness as you far away i haven never been image. i will lose you some day i hope to see you just one time again before i go under the earth where will be my final place i lost the life i lost the words no one care about me after you left you drew the smile on my lips and reached my heart like a poison in the blood this smile has no longer been alive, but become a worth nightmare in the life we had laugh, laugh, and laugh then cry then kind then pains to throw myself finally between your hands your far explosive my erupt inside me no on can stop it, just you can do the one has the magic on my heart i miss you my lady i miss your voice [This message has been edited by Rommance_Touch (07-07-2004 07:11 AM).] |
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sweetie_cute_2004 New Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 5 |
wow this poem is veryy cute,,it had some grammer problems but soo cute,,i loved it though your lady must be soo lucky !! |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Yeah...... I had a huge crush on a guy I knew. I kinda miss him. love Juju |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I know how this goes. It has happened to a great many of us. You write this nicely  I left my wallet in El Segundo... |
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