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BRoke up ,but still loving!! -- Does that make any sense ???
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BRoke up ,but still loving!! -- Does that make any sense ??? |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
After thinking you were gone, I have decided to move on , I have promised to love you for life , But things just did work out as we both wanted, I had to leave , I had to leave, And just leave everything for god, I haVE to leave everything to fate, Let me just take one last breath without just one tear falling down my DAMN ugly face, Stop making me feeling bad for leaving, you know i had no choice, But i still love you to death, I STILL love you with all my heart, YOU are who made me grow, YOU ARE who made me smile, you are who made me real, you are who made me breath, you are who made me laugh, you are who made me love, you are who made me fly, you are who made me feel the one, YOU ARE WHO MADE ME FEEL LIKE im alive,!! Even though I hurted you more than twice, all i got to say now is i will always love you for life!!! ------------------------------------------- Hey, WELL this is a poem i wrote in 10 minutes,,i dont actually like it but i just wanted to share it with you,..please be honest and tell me everything,,.. Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!! |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I like it, It reminds me of a song that some pop star would be singing..very very nice  http://www.nexopia.com/profile.php?uid=34810 <--all me baby! |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
Send this poem 4 that one u wanna him share u to feel yr still caring,,,,,yr poem is nice but i think u can try hardly to let yr love life and breathe |
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