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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
i'm so sick of missing you! i haven't talked to you anywhere, but in my head, for seventeen days, and the conversations are getting old. i want to move on, but it's so hard when memories, won't leave me the hell alone. go away just let me be, i can't stand thoughts of you. i used to cry when i realized, i had to forget you, but now please, that's what i want to do, that's what i have to do. go away just let me be, i don't want to care about you. i know i've dealt with worse in life, but i can't recall anything offhand, that hurt as bad as this feeling, of losing you. "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
i like it, it's pretty good. i can't exactly say that i relate, but i do understand... there's a person that seems to feel that exact way about me at this time... yeah well anyways, nice job |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
this poem was the most intersting poem ,i truly inlove with it,,,its the same way i feel now ,,,well keep posting please ,,thanks 4 sharin love and respect peace Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I can't say I love this poem or that I hated it, it was alright. But I did like the fact that you were able to express your emotion so well. Anyway, overall, nice job. Keep it up!  ~Alli~ |
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