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young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-06-29 07:12 PM

here's my new lyrics, tell me what you think

A Half Past Sundown

The moon is drunk with the sun
Just waiting to sober in the morn,
And like a stream's faded uhm
It sinks in the coming storm.

The stars are desperate for friends
Among the bruised in the sky,
And blue never looked odd to them,
Us who please all those brown eyes.

But heaven is lost
When we unleash this hell.
Forgetting the cost
And how many times we fell.

So bleak among the meek that stand
When all around stare at the ground,
But you fight on.
Bloodied by the white eyed hand
That screamed when the fight grew loud,
But you stay strong.

But heaven is lost
When we unleash this hell.
Forgetting the cost
And how many times we fell.
Our crowns cast low
From these unworthy brows,
Put aside what we know
And bleed from our mouths.

now im alone, but not lonely like before

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-06-29 07:27 PM

I really like it a lot. I really do like all your work.
Keep it up!!!

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2004-06-29 10:39 PM

thanks steph. this is a new song written for my band.

now im alone, but not lonely like before

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

3 posted 2004-06-29 10:46 PM

Anytime anytime. What kinda of band are you in? Cause thats really cool!

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

4 posted 2004-06-30 07:46 AM

well, I'm in an acoustic band. We are kinda emo, but at the same time we have a lot of more poppy stuff. We are pretty unique.

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

5 posted 2004-06-30 06:29 PM

Thats cool! I have been asked to play bass in a band once. I turned them down cause I dont know how to play bass, yet. Your band sounds very interesting, lol. But I'm sure you are probably pretty good. Keep up the writing!

A.L
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 131

6 posted 2004-07-08 11:34 PM

cool lyrics...what kind of music do you play?

Sweetest Sorrow X
Member

since 2004-01-19

Posts 146
From a cradle to a casket

7 posted 2004-07-08 11:41 PM

Thats Awesome..whats your bands name?

I hope your sleeping good at nights....
Knowing I never sleep at all

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

8 posted 2004-07-09 12:36 PM

my bands name is April's Falling, but we might change it to Other-End-of-Nowhere

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

9 posted 2004-07-09 12:40 PM

thank you everyone for the comments, please check out my other stuff too! thanks.

ambivalence
Junior Member

since 2006-07-13

Posts 15
Canada

10 posted 2006-07-14 03:02 AM

I'm becoming a fan.

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

11 posted 2006-07-15 01:36 AM

i love the lyrics and i like april's falling but most bands i have followed got bigger after a name change for some reason... i dunno i like the lyrics though i love reading your stuff

M e m o r i e s
Junior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 14
Alaska, USA

12 posted 2006-07-15 07:54 PM

*fangirl squeal*

A BAND! I love bands! And your lyrics! z0mg they are sssooo good! Me wuf! I can't wait to buy your CD! ^^

Here is a good luck cookie for you! *gives cookie*

oh_my_goshijustgotexcited
Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 52
USA, IDAHO

13 posted 2006-07-15 08:27 PM

The stars are desperate for friends
Among the bruised in the sky,
And blue never looked odd to them,
Us who please all those brown eyes

very very powerful
good job. i love reading your work because i can tell you absolutely love what you do.. you are a very talented writer.
thanks for sharing!

Viola

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