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SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

0 posted 2004-06-29 12:32 PM

"The Other Side"

What's it like on the other side, I used to know inside

No matter how I try I can't catch up to their side

I used to be one of "them", popular, cool, one of the "in" crowd

I miss that life on the other side, but know now what I missed before on this side

Times have changed and for that I know who's to blame

Will things ever be the same again

I miss them do they remember me, the old me, the one I used to be

Or do they see me now, the new and improved girl I'm now inside

Either way I won't forget the other side, tons of friends and winning smiles

Do they miss me on the other side, or is it too late for this girl inside

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-06-29 07:52 PM

Hmmm very interesting, I like it. But some how it makes me sad. Dont ask me why, it just does.
Keep writing!

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

2 posted 2004-06-29 11:49 PM

Thanks for replying Stepharoo! Strange how happy things can make us sad and sad things like in a weird way can bring us comfort at times.
Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-06-30 06:48 PM

wow ,,,,,im in love with this poem keep posting,,....love and respect

Fate is what controls the world so just let it go and I PROMISE YOU WILL MAKE IT!!!

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

4 posted 2004-06-30 07:49 PM

Thanks Sweet! Hope to see some new work from you soon as well. Take Care!

Lisa

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

5 posted 2004-07-01 03:22 AM

hey,
very interesting...a different perspective. i hope you get what you want. thanks for sharing.
bergundy

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

6 posted 2004-07-01 10:42 PM

I like your name...bergundy. Its unquie!! Take care.

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

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