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Renovated Skies |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN 
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Renovated Skies Thunder growls from heaven, A perpetual pleaser, Building dark skies for ground And roots stretch to hearts. What awkward things given, An unforgiven bleeder, To sons and daughters bound By eclipsed, blind stars. Listen to your brethren, A tired eyed seeder, "As lightning strikes town, Burn the aged parts." Ah, now there's that spark in your eye. |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
wicked awesome heh... i like it |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
sounds... old. i like it. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thank you |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
wow, this is so cool. I really like it. *thumbs up* |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
it sounds older, not something you see around here much, I enjoy it! I'm so envious, you always have such descriptive poems! Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't. |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thank you all very much for the compliments |
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