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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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Earth

0 posted 2004-06-24 01:01 AM



I have moved to a different world,
i have moved to a different life ,
that cant be lost

im new ,im a new person with so much trust,
Moving on to a different step of life,
I have left what made me smile for two secs and moved on to the new love i shared with people i truly loved,
im not ready to screw it again just for one thing in life that cost all my life to get fired like hell,
so get away andlet me feel free,
Your not worth the tears,
Not worth the fears,
not worth my dreams,

Im here with a new smile ,
I just crossed a mile,
so dont make me get back to a different file of life,
YOU lost and i have won ,
so lets move on,

YOU know you have nothingleft from me but my smileso keep it real and keep it be ,

NEVER FORGET MY SMILE WILL ALWAYS BE REAL!!!

I hate the world because it does'nt have a taste, i HATE the world because it does'nt have a color.!!
Admit that im right,,!

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Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 149
Washington, USA
1 posted 2004-06-24 03:27 AM


Hey, I really liked this.
My favorite lines were,
"Your not worth the tears,
Not worth the fears,
not worth my dreams,".
Well keep up the great work.

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2 posted 2004-06-24 05:33 AM


this one was nice i liked it. good write.

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and matt!
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tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world
3 posted 2004-06-24 02:11 PM


I liked this one, I haven't heard any of yours in awhile and was begining to wonder...but this one was good, keep it uP!

Love is giving him the ability to break your heart...but trusting him enough to know he won't.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
4 posted 2004-06-24 02:50 PM


hey tapper,,sis yea i know ,.,,i just dont get online much ,,,,i just sit for 2 secs check my mail and leave but i will try to get more poems on lolol,,,well love and respect and thanks for ur replies ,,,peaceeeee

I GTG VACATIONSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS ARE COMING

I hate the world because it does'nt have a taste, i HATE the world because it does'nt have a color.!!
Admit that im right,,!

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