navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #7 » your shadow
Teen Poetry #7
Post A Reply Post New Topic your shadow Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
punkrockerrobin
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2004-06-23 07:02 AM


your shadow is all i can see.
but i do not see you.
is it all in my mind.
or are you still there?
i thought you left me.
but then why do i still see your shadow?
it is all alone.
where have you disappeared to?
why is your shadow with me and not with you?
am i dreaming still?
or is this real?
come back and get your shadow and
and never return again.
for if i see you.
i don't think i could go back to the way things were.
so just take your shadow and disappear!

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

© Copyright 2004 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
Stepharoo
Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149
Washington, USA
1 posted 2004-06-24 02:02 AM


I liked it...It really made me think about how things are in my life...good poem...Keep it up!
anawnda
Member
since 2002-07-26
Posts 113

2 posted 2004-06-24 07:55 AM


"do u have to let it linger?...do u have to? do u have to let it linger?...."

reminded me of that song. great poem, something most of us can relate.


fearing-laughter
Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)
3 posted 2004-06-25 03:45 AM


i like the last line best =)
bergundy

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Teen Poetry #7 » your shadow

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary