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i've come to rock you
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i've come to rock you |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
i know you 'dont like to be mean', but fortunately, it's never been a problem for me. so these are the words, that i held back, and this is the verse, that will kick your ass. how can you 'love' someone, based only on looks? i thought you were different than that! we were perfect, but sadly, one plus one rarely equals two, and now i am left alone, cleaning up after you. no relationship is certain! but that doesn't stop everyone else, from trying and hoping, praying for the best! i should of known what you would do, you may be new, but i'm a pro at this game, which is why i wrote this poem... well, basically.. what i'm trying to say, is leave me the hell alone, and go away! -bergundy- hey well obviously the last line was a lot different in the unedited version, i'm sure many of you can replace 'leave me alone and go away' with a much shorter and sweeter four letter word. see moderators, i do have some self control :-D the title is just lyrics from the song i was listening to at the time. coal chamber-amir of the desert. thanks for reading "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
I like it! I can really feel the power! its really good, keep it up! |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
meow, haha. replying to your own stuff is amusing "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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