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Teen Poetry #7

Weeping Heart

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

0 posted 2004-06-18 11:06 AM

Exactly 121 days from today,
Our love story ended.

Brings to mind McNight's lyrics:
"Its been 6months,8days 12hours since u went away,
I miss u so much..."

Our many good memories,
Still reside in my heart,
And so does the pain.

If only the picture in my mind is perfect,
Then all would have been well.
But i cant help but hurt so bad,
That u looked me in the eye those times,
And lied to my face that i was the only one.

And now i wonder what part of it was real,
And what part wasnt.
But my comfort lies in that,
I know i loved u,and u loved me.
If only for a little while.
But still my heart lies in confusion...

Been tryin to heal ever since,
Nothing has worked yet,
I know its a process,
And with the Lord holding my hand,
I will eventually move on...

Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2004-06-18 08:46 PM

Nice to see you posting here again. I really like this one alot. I can relate to it. I think your english grammar's getting better too! Great job!

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

Strider612
Junior Member

since 2003-12-21

Posts 46
Alabama, United States of America

2 posted 2004-06-19 09:51 PM

I have to say that I liked that one. It might not have been very formal, but it did the job well. I can understand how you feel...I probably did that to a girl I know. I think you did well with this one.

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