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Teen Poetry #7

Solace

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2004-06-17 08:48 PM

Frozen in time - forever more
My heart complete - together
Numb to outside feeling - myself
All pain diminshed - mended
Healed, if you will - by me
Cracked and open - vulnerable
My soul and love - all for you
Scared - on my own.

"When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace." -Jimi Hendrix

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2004-06-18 08:48 PM

I really like this alot. The emotion in it just flows out to the reader. Great length too. I especially liked the last 3 lines.
Thanks for sharing, this one's going in my library.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2004-06-18 10:11 PM

I liked the style here, it's something I haven't seen before. The length was good also. Thanks for the read.
Jen

Everything gets better in the end, and if it's not better, it's probably not the end.

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