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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
This isn't supposed to be romantic... it's about my friend and I just having fun, but since it's not really specific or understandable, you can kind of take it however it comes to you... My oranges and yellows and blues Dance with your black shirt and shoes. The blue in your hair makes our sky And my blonde can scatter the stars; We’ll pretend that we can fly, And the evening will be ours. With giggles and smiles engulfing us, We are day and night; We are dusk. The sinking sun is painting the world; Here under the rising night we will twirl. Beneath the stars, barefoot in the grass, We’ll dance in the spotlight our moon will cast. It’s not quite day, and not quite night, We’re spinning sparks of summer twilight. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey, what's up? yeah! i got this, it was cool....just about hanging out and whatnot during the summer? i like it a lot, it's weird but cool...refreshing from some of the depressing stuff i've been reading/writing lately. keep writing bergundy "Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man) |
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Strider612 Junior Member
since 2003-12-21
Posts 46Alabama, United States of America |
Just a nice poem. Not much I can say about this one. It's cool. |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
Yeah I know this poem is really not that good, and the rhyming is pretty harsh, and i kind of regretted posting it afterwards, because I'm not searching for critiques or anything.. I wrote it for my friend and it's one of those poems that it doesn't matter really if it's good or not... So thanks anyways  |
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