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WhAt WiLl Be tHE eND
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WhAt WiLl Be tHE eND |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
What will be the end i met her, where i dont know ooh, i met her in my dream its so pretty soul she always with me where i go she's always beside its my soul will i touch this soul someday ooooh, i found her, i talked her i hard her voice, i hard her giggle we talked for a while ooooh, dont break my heart again why will you escape again, i need you beside believe me, you will come back we attracted to each other like magnetait believe me the end u will be between my hands someday you will feel the warm you havent felt yet you will get the love you havent seen it i know and sure your sharing me, unless you didnt escaped yor afriad, but im not sure of what are you afraid of love, im too but i really got in it im on the first step of the stair but its a strong one i havent felt this strong feel before the amazing of that i touched your soul via text lines, its so clear adore its something out of exciting effect what are you looking like or how am i looking like we touched each other soul ,,,dont break that,,, plz dont break that,,,plz dont break that im sure u will come back and will through yrself between my hands, im waiting you as i live Someone hadnt felt that before, but it does feel it now |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
This has alot of potential, the grammar just needs alot of work. It makes the reader kinda stumble through it. Other than that, great job. Thanks for sharing. W.W. |
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