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Teen Poetry #7

Meredith

CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2004-06-02 08:03 PM

Wow, I haven't written anything in a long time... I've had some major writers block, and still do. This is certainly not my best work ever, but I think it's maybe at least somewhat decent. I miss being able to write... Haven't written anything good by my standards since about November. Anyway, this poem is about a girl who I got to know this weekend at a youth rally across the state... She's a freshman, I'm a junior, and she lives 215 miles away, so I'm confused about what to do because I kinda like her. Blah, such teenage drama. lol Anyway, let me know what you think.

MEREDITH

I know I really shouldn't feel this way
There's so many things saying it's not right
But I'm not sure what I can say
Because I still can't stop thinking about you

What thoughts are running through your head?
Do you wonder why we were brought together?
So many things I wish I would have said
But I guess I wasn't ready yet

Now I am over here, and you're over there
So many miles are separating us now
And I only wish that I didn't care...
Because then I wouldn't feel lost like I do

I need a sign to tell me what to do
God will surely answer my prayer
But my thoughts are broken up in two
And i'm not sure what is best for me

- C.K. Natland -

Nobody Is Perfect Until You Fall In Love With Them.

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

1 posted 2004-06-03 02:01 AM

CODY!!!
Hey you! I've missed you around here, I'm sorry to hear about the writers block and about Miss Meredith, those type of situations are always rough and finding the answer is usually not easy...I liked the poem, it was very expresive of your frusteration. Not one of your best, but I still could relate. I would watch the ryhme sceme though, it seems to be there in some places and not in others...Anyways I hope to hear more from you and good luck in whatever your mind decides to do.

~Live and Laugh~

The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow
~Bella~

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