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pammy
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 50
California

0 posted 2004-06-01 09:31 PM



We havent been friends for very long,
but one thing i know is true,
im grateful for the time we have been
and very grateful for you

We have stood by each other when a guy breaks our hearts,
and we ask one others advice.
we've had a few problems
but whats one little fight?

you give me help and strength when i need it,
your always there to offer a hug.
this friendship is so great
and it will last forever
dont forget you can come to me,
with whatever yoru needs may be.

~*Pammy*~
"Scarred from the past, longing for the future,and fearing the present"

© Copyright 2004 Pamela Elizabeth! - All Rights Reserved
sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
1 posted 2004-06-01 11:51 PM


this poem was is amazing.,but only if it was longer i really love long poems they express more,well keep up the great work,,

peace

I hate the world because it does'nt have a taste, i HATE the world because it does'nt have a color.!!
Admit that im right,,!

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