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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-30 12:54 PM



The worst pain in life is loosing someone you truly love,

Loosing a little boy\little girl, that you know,,loosing them without a goodbye,

TEN YEAR old boy just dying ,he have'nt seen his future or  knowing what would happen to him next,

Why?,, why dying in a young age where he have'nt seen happiness yet ,have'nt seen true love,?

Just playing on his bike riding and just a car crashEs him and runs away,,

what is that we call?,its pain,

Going to his funeral seeing him  go down on the earth's surface,  seeing his mom crying ,crying and screaming out "MY BOY ,MY BABY I HAVE RAISED him,ALL TEN YEARS,,AND NOW ?

WHY now?
why is it you die now?

   I WANT TO SEE YOU AGAIN please,im asking god just to see you please,,


I hate the world because it does'nt have a taste, i HATE the world because it does'nt have a color.!!
you cant change my mind.,..

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tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world
1 posted 2004-05-30 04:31 PM


o wow, that's sad. I pray that didn't really happen! Good way to release some feelings though...it didn't really flow but I got the point.

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
  *~Erin~*

Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 97

2 posted 2004-05-31 06:23 AM


Hi, i know yr muslim so u hadnt to use "Why?,, why dying in a young age where he have'nt seen happiness yet ,have'nt seen true love,?", cuz u know the ans..we dont know, when and how we will die its something abscence of us and forever couldnt guess it..
what we can say "hope 4 him/her the paradies"

Allah Bless All, Sis

~~~Romance_Touch~~~
~Going To Say Goodbye~

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